Monday, July 13, 2009

Koshish

koshish karta hoon mai, aajkal khush rehne ki

na jaane kaha tak Qaamyab hoon

kyunki wada kiya hai kisi se khush rehne ka

na jaane kaha tak qaamyab hoon

wo jo baste hai hamesha meri rooh me

wo jo shaamil hai meri har justajoo me

chahta hoo unko ilm na ho meri haalat ka

na jaane kaha tak qamyaab hoon.

Koshish karta hoo mai.......

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5 comments:

  1. Nalin RanjanJuly 17, 2009 at 7:10 AM

    Excellent Satyendra! Way to go! Very expressive!

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  2. satyarafiJuly 17, 2009 at 7:11 AM

    thank you nalin ji:)

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  3. Faiz Ahmed AseerJuly 20, 2009 at 10:42 AM

    i know the truth....lol..kidding... well written bhai,shayar ban rahe ho shayar? jaani, i mean saty, ah jo bhi ho,mere pet pe kyun laath maar rahe ho?

    ek do typo hai,zara edit kar lena, aakal=aajkal
    qaamyaab=kaamyaab, hoo=hoon.... else excellent writing..keep it up

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  4. UnknownSeptember 1, 2009 at 9:58 AM

    sad one ;)

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  5. BeenhereSeptember 17, 2009 at 10:28 PM

    dil ki nazar se dekhiye har ek shai haseen hai

    khushiyaan hoti nahi muhtaaj kisi bhi gham ki
    jo talashoge to saagar bhi simat jaayega

    keep it up saty

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